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I made my first oc bio! I'm very curious to know what you all think of them. Please tell me what needs to be fixed so that they won't be a total Mary Sue!
These two are my first oc's so of course they may not be good or they seem Mary Sue-ish so constructive criticism is very much appreciated!

Blanca
Age:13
Hair: long and white
Eyes: hazel/green
Weapon: Her magical paintbrush that allows her to have her art come alive and also gives her the ability to jump into paintings.
Weakness: All of the creations she made with her paintbrush is weak to fire. Just like burning down any painting, they will be burned to the ground until they eventually die.
Personality: Blanca is very eccentric and adventurous girl. She usually tends to get in a lot of trouble but she means well. Blanca prefers to be inside the world of her paintings since she believes that the real world is full and boring. Blanca would always drag her sister into her paintings even though she doesn't like going through whatever Blanca's crazy imagination made.

Nolia
Age:13
Hair: Long and Black
Eyes: Blue
Weapon: Nolia uses her baton to create music that puts everyone into a trance and have no choice but to listen to the music. Another ability that she has is to use her music to change the moods of everyone.
Weakness: Well the only thing you can do is to just not listen to the music. You can do it simply by just covering your ears or alternatively, play your own music to counter Nolia's.
Personality: Unlike Blanca, Nolia is quiet and likes to keep things to herself. She prefers staying indoors and practice on her music. Nolia is the most logical out of the duo and is almost always the one to help her sister out of trouble.

So there you go. My first attempt at a bio. Looking at it I can tell that this is not best but oh well, at least I tried lol.
So this person you see on the top is stealing art, bases and screenshots of without permission. What makes things worse is that they will constantly remove comments and block people who calls them out for it. They haven't been on DA for a while, but they have yet to apologise for stealing other people's work. So I just want you all to cautious about this person and if they have stolen any of your work, then please report them. That is all and have a nice day.
These two are my first oc's so of course they may not be good or they seem Mary Sue-ish so constructive criticism is very much appreciated!

Blanca
Age:13
Hair: long and white
Eyes: hazel/green
Weapon: Her magical paintbrush that allows her to have her art come alive and also gives her the ability to jump into paintings.
Weakness: All of the creations she made with her paintbrush is weak to fire. Just like burning down any painting, they will be burned to the ground until they eventually die.
Personality: Blanca is very eccentric and adventurous girl. She usually tends to get in a lot of trouble but she means well. Blanca prefers to be inside the world of her paintings since she believes that the real world is full and boring. Blanca would always drag her sister into her paintings even though she doesn't like going through whatever Blanca's crazy imagination made.

Nolia
Age:13
Hair: Long and Black
Eyes: Blue
Weapon: Nolia uses her baton to create music that puts everyone into a trance and have no choice but to listen to the music. Another ability that she has is to use her music to change the moods of everyone.
Weakness: Well the only thing you can do is to just not listen to the music. You can do it simply by just covering your ears or alternatively, play your own music to counter Nolia's.
Personality: Unlike Blanca, Nolia is quiet and likes to keep things to herself. She prefers staying indoors and practice on her music. Nolia is the most logical out of the duo and is almost always the one to help her sister out of trouble.

So there you go. My first attempt at a bio. Looking at it I can tell that this is not best but oh well, at least I tried lol.

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lightshadow74
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Howdy Broski's! I'm not really here to submit art since I couldn't draw to save my life, but I might at least write a journal entry or two of a oc of mine, or a story I happened to think of. Other than that, I'm just browsing through the website. It would be nice to have one of you to try to draw my oc's, but since I don't have a reference I don't think it can be done. But that's fine! I'm just happy to see all of your wonderful drawings here on DA!😄

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:icondelilahhyuuga238:
DelilahHyuuga238 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much for the fav>v<
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lightshadow74 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2017  New Deviant
You're welcome! I really love the vibrant colors!
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DelilahHyuuga238 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :love:
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DragonZekrom Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the fav!! :happybounce: 
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lightshadow74 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2017  New Deviant
You're welcome! The drawing was really cute!
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Spark-Flower Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the fave :)
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lightshadow74 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2017  New Deviant
You're welcome! :3
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Gengargamer64 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Thx for the fav! X3
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lightshadow74 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2017  New Deviant
You're welcome! Lana is my second favorite Sun and Moon character, and the picture is cute! :3
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Gengargamer64 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Hehe! Cool! Thx! X3
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